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:iconguaya:
thanx for all the comments
:iconjessichu:
Thank you for the favorite, watch, and all the comments!!!

They really made my day!

Do you mind if I add you on livejournal?

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:iconobliteratexme:
First of all, thank you for the comments and +Fav.

Secondly, concerning your desire for a push in the right direction, I think you're heading in a great direction as it is. I'd suggest keeping background objects in mind [so they distract from the main subject? do they just make the photo look cluttered? etc], and also putting into considering how to make the whole frame work... sometimes, you'll get the best idea, or the best pose, and so on, and when you get to photograph it... you'll see that sometimes the frame could have been pushed a little in order to really emphasize what you wanted to show [for example... [link] could have been really well emphasized if you were able to angle it so that the bush/tree in the background wasn't showing... now i'm not sure how possible it would be to do that, seeing as I wasn't there, but I'm just giving an example of what I meant].


Another suggestion would be the 'missing foot syndrome' [as I sometimes call it]. I understand that sometimes the background gets in the way and you'd need to cut off parts of the person's body in the photo in order to get rid of the stuff in the background. But if the entire person's body is showing... except for that one foot, it kinda leaves the viewer feeling like there isn't a sense of wholeness to the subject...

I dunno, just a few things to keep in mind. I was hesitating to give any constructive criticism because last time I did, you sounded like you wanted to politely rip my head off o.o;;

But anyhow, you're on the right path as it is. Just keep practicing and experimenting...
:iconsalmonius:
thank you for favin invisibl :)

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:iconsalmonius:
cute gallery !

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:iconalchemistmcmlxxxvii:
you have a really cool gallery

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:iconsayra:
thank you for the :+fav: 's :hug:
:icondymention:
Thanks for the + watch. :aww:

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:icondymention:
Thanks for the :+fav:
Kick ass gallery you have here, I really like the black and white you have as a feature :aww:

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:icondrmarten:
thx for the favorite on my Burlesque Shot ! ;-)
cheers
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